Talk:United States Naval Enlistment Rendezvous (FamilySearch Historical Records)
Excellent! Now it's absolutely perfect (in my opinion :) !--Carol B. Moss 16:56, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback. I have moved the definition up to the beginning of the article. NBT
This is a well written artice with very good explanations. My first thought was "what is a Rendezvous?" I found the answer down the page and felt I learned something there. I might suggest the definition be placed earlier in the page so someone like me without any knowledge of Naval operations would understand why we should look at this collection.
Thank you for a great article!
--Carol B. Moss 17:02, 21 December 2011 (UTC)